I have an issue. I have this line that I came up with while free-forming in the car. The problem with free-from/beat poetry while driving is that, unless you have the presence of mind to record yourself, you forget all the cool stuff you came up with by the time you reach the driveway. I hit the same refrain:
Turgid, tumultuous tumbling words
I love alliteration. There is something about hitting the same letter – the same note – while putting together similar syllables that just sits well in my heart.
And while I know that I pulled in Shakespeare and Dr. Seuss while I was riding the beat, I can’t for the life of me remember this morning what I said.
Then let the lesson be: When you have a good idea, pull off in the nearest truck stop and write it down. The destination will always be there.
(Unless it’s a job interview. Then go do that because food is a terrific motivator.)
I hear in my mind the sheepdogs baying
The commas unraveling unruly herds
My mind is vocabulary racing to cliffside
Turgid, tumultuous, tumbling words!
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“Turgid, tumultuous, tumbling words!” Love the line!
Thank you! By all means, take it and run with it – maybe come up with your own rap-battle-esque beat poem.
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I’m old 🙂 can’t do the rap stuff. I’m more jazzy and R&B. Will be following you though.